Application,
Essay, and Recommendations
Application
Applications to
college are made up of the application form, which identifies the student,
SAT/ACT scores, the studentÕs high school transcript, teacher recommendations,
and a school counselor recommendation.
Essays
(Printed with permission from the Associated Colleges of
the Midwest)
Tips
for Writing Your College Application Essay
Here's advice from the
people who read them!
Does writing a college
application essay seem like a daunting task to you? For most people, the answer
is a resounding "yes!" However, the essay is also an opportunity for you to
show your talents and creativity to their best advantage.
To help you get started,
here are some insights on writing an essay from the people who read hundreds of
them every year — admission officers at ACM colleges.
The essay is your
chance to use your voice.
The essay is the living,
breathing part of your application to a college. In the essay, you can speak in
your own voice and personalize your application. Here's
your opportunity to show something about you that doesn't really come across
elsewhere in your application.
So, step back and be
reflective. Think about who you are as an individual. How do you view the
world? What do you care about deeply? What experiences and people have been important in shaping you as a person? What are your
aspirations in life?
It is in such reflection
that you can find your own, unique voice. That's the voice that will help you
write an interesting essay that only you could have written.
Now,
on to some nuts and bolts of writing the essay.
Show your command of the
basics of good writing. Here are some key points that admission officers look for
in an essay:
¤ Make
sure to answer the essay question and to follow all the
instructions that are given.
¤ Start
off with a strong opening paragraph that captures the reader's interest.
¤ Use
a style that you find comfortable and that is appropriate for the subject
matter.
¤ Use
correct grammar, punctuation and spelling.
¤ Make
a point and stick to it; develop your argument or narrative.
¤ Check
all of your facts. Do you mention a date, place or event in
your essay? Make sure it's correct.
¤ Have
you given your reader complete information, so he or she won't be confused?

In general, it's best to be succinct. If there is a recommended length
for the essay, pay attention to it.
¤ The
essay should be neatly typed.
¤ Remember
that mistakes, especially sloppy mistakes, make it look like you don't take the
essay (and, by extension, the application) very seriously.
What to write about?
Where to look for an essay topic.
Does
the application ask you to choose a topic to write about? There are as many
(actually, many more) good topics as there are applicants. Here are some ideas
for where you might look for an essay topic:
¤ Do
you have hobbies and non-school pursuits that really excite you and that engage
your heart and mind? Writing about your out-of-classroom interests could help
bring out a part of you that's not covered — or not covered completely and to your fullest advantage —
elsewhere in your application.
¤ Is
there a social cause that you hold near and dear? Remember, an essay is not an
academic paper. A cause that you feel passionately about and that has been in
your thoughts and activities, might be the basis for a strong essay.
¤ Perhaps
there is an event (local, national or international) that has touched you in a
personal way.
¤
Is there an academic subject that really sparks your
interest? Why does the subject engage you? Has it led to experiences or study
outside of school? There may be essay material that goes beyond the courses you
took or scores on AP tests.
How
to handle a topic
Often, colleges will ask you, the applicant, to write
about an experience you've had, an achievement in your life, or someone who
has had a significant influence on your life. In handling such a topic —
or, for that matter, any topic you select — go beyond the what and dig into the how and why. In other words, don't
settle for simply providing a description of an event. Take the next step and
tell about the impact the situation had on you. For example:
¤
This is a personal essay, not a travelogue. So, if you're writing about a
trip to another country, tell about how your experiences affected you, and why
they were interesting or meaningful to you. In other words, the people reading
the essay are interested in what makes you tick and how you got the way you
are, not in how the trains run in Paris.
¤
Are you writing a tribute to your grandparents and their influence on your
childhood?
Be personal and specific, not just sentimental. Explain how the particular things
your grandparents did or said were important to you.
¤
Did you overcome an athletic injury and recover to perform well? A description of the
type of cast you wore and your rehab routine is not likely to make a compelling
essay. However, your reflections on what it felt like to be watching your
teammates, instead of competing alongside them, might be the basis of a
memorable essay.
Recommendations